All Comments on 'The Mint Epilogue'

It’s like you suddenly stopped caring about the story and wrote a quick few paragraphs to end it. Not written very well, other chapters were much better than this. I am glad that they were freed, yet it feels rushed...

Your writing has potential, keep going ...

Unfortunately life has interfered with your writing I'd have liked a longer epilogue but when needs must then you've gotta do what's right ... as for using another author I don't think that would work as they'd have no idea how to develop the story in they way you'd like or would've done yourself. I really enjoyed it but all the best and if you add more great .. if not then good luck.

This has been my favorite series I have read yet. I am sad to hear it might never see its true end come to potential. I truly hope you can buy out a little time now and then to keep going. I personally feel if finished to its fullest potential this is a publishable book worthy story. I have been on the lookout for other writers that might do an ok job but I agree with the other comment this is your baby so no one would develop it better than you. While it's good to have an idea of the ending there are a lot of middle ground info left untouched. Please don't give up yet. Would buy this as a completed book for sure.

I strongly enjoyed the story. It was well written and interesting. I appreciate that your life has taken you away and want to thank you for at least showing us how it would end. I hope that if you ever get some more "free time" (good luck with it!!) that perhaps you come back and finish it how you wanted to.

I also want to tell you how much I enjoyed your series and will miss it but you gotta eat and keep the lights on. I also hope that you can continue to give us something from your imagination it is a fun place for my imagination to visit ;) Maybe some short stories here and there if you get any kinda moment. I appreciate that you tried not to leave us hanging that was extremely thoughtful of you. Much love and good luck in all

Jooney

Huh, well crap you move from trying to glorifying the all too real sex trafficking trade with token talk of escape to a predictable downward spiral making it more brutal scenario. Ridiculously far fetched, it’s a fine bloody time to take this into the ridiculous realms of fantasy.

“.....compensated the slaves after making an agreement not to press charges” yeah right as if $1,000,000 would be enough money to compensate for what they went through. It wouldn’t be down to the victims on wether or not to press charges. On top of that I find it hard to believe that they would want to accept money from their captors, doing that would make them feel like whores instead of survivors.

The only thing I can see that makes sense is that it’s finally listed as Non Con.

Thank you ! I really loved the thought and complexity you included as well as the level of dietal. This was very fun to read. I’m disappointed but totally get it ! Good luck. I hope one day you will have the time and inspiration to continue!