All Comments on 'The Mommy Slut Ch. 03'

You need to describe the sex scenes much better and add in some emotion, desire and affection.

Keep it going, I am enjoying the story. AAAA++++

Good story, like the overall theme however, no young man who has just made his mom his own personal slut, would not want to have sex with her right away. Keeping this going with him not fully dominating his mom and using her for his willing sex doll/slave, is had to swallow. He should have her naked servicing him daily and sleeping with her at night. Also, her brother should be told to go play with his wife and leave his Mom alone. More detailed sex is in order and not just implied sex. You have a good story theme going but I just think more hot detail would improve your work so much better. Good luck

Can you please decide whether the uncle is Adam or Andy?