by MademoiselleChatRose
Damn that cliffhanger ending. I wanted some fucking! Please make the next chapter!
Very promising start. Good worldbuilding, and even though you didn't actually write much quite hot. Be sure to write longer sexy scenes in future installments, it's very unfair to leave your readers hanging in a sex story after all ;)
But overall great stuff, I always had a sweet spot for dystopic futures with subby femboys and tgirls. If you keep writing I will keep reading.