All Comments on 'The New House Ch. 02'

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IainmoreIainmoreover 4 years agoAuthor
Gutless Anon

Yet another gutless Anon who has nothing constructive to say. Have you ever heard the expression FO.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
why not leave?

Young and not married yet and she now knows she likes lots of sex with others. Why not just end the engagement and continue on until she matures, if ever, and wants just one man? She already stated that her fiancé will never really sexually satisfy her. Fun story of sluts and I thank you for writing but you are setting her up for a lifetime of disappointment if she has to continue to cheat on the side.

IainmoreIainmoreover 4 years agoAuthor
re why not leave.

Ta for the constructive input. It is one possible ending and the story evolves more in the next part and that is close to complete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

PATHETIC... The only virginity in this story is the author's brain.

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Constructive criticism always welcome, that is constructive underlined. I go through obsessive writing bouts before the block strikes. I hope that getting feedback here will unblock those blocks that have plagued me in the past, When I get blocked with one story I will move...

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