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by twpsyntx
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Anonymous11 months agothis POV choice is ALWAYS a bad idea. So overdone, especially on this site, and just awful.
Anonymous11 months agoCongratulations on your first story. Too many you, you, you, you.... please get an editor. If you prefer not,
I recommend working on a better flow with your writing. Good luck.
Master_Doctor11 months agoIn additionally, this whole upper brain vs lower brain thing was so annoying that I couldnt even finish the story. Good look on the next one.
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twpsyntx@twpsyntxI have been writing for a few years and people have always told me I should publish them. So I decided to start here and see how it goes.
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