All Comments on 'The Office Manager'

I'm sure Linette found a myriad of things the needed screwing tightly. thanks

Good premise.

But sketchy. Rished. Lacking in step-by-step details.

She knws he's a virgin, and one without any sort of experience with a woman. But there's no attempt to 'teach' him what she wants done. And there's no slow playing with his cock and balls, questioning him how he likes it.

Sex is just too automatic.

Three stars.

I realize that this is your first story, and maybe it's from your real experiences so I'll be somewhat critical about your writing, I don't know much about you as an author, but I would suggest you should read some similar type stories before you author any new works. I'd like to see you succeed as a storyteller.