All Comments on 'The Opening Party'

Shock schlock. Once is unique and thrilling. Two out of two is a limitation of psychosis. Seek help.

An interesting concept with very great potential, but maybe could be better if told from the artist's point of view. For example, how did she come up with the idea; what was she thinking in the bathroom as she got naked; sensations as she was sealed in the vacuum bed; what did she hear and feel while on display i.e. muffled comments, the feel of hands and tongues, her juices flowing down her legs et al. Just a few thoughts for this story and possibly future stories. Check out Ann's Art Project by qexiqex as an example. Good luck on your future endeavors.

Thanks for the feedback. Good points.

Expand a bit more. Too short

I hope the anonymous criticisms haven’t put you off writing. There is great potential. Love your style. Please add more!

Not at all. I’ve just been busy doing other stuff. I have a number of new stories coming up. Thanks for the kind words.