All Comments on 'The OWLS Club Pt. 17'

Oh Dear....

Ah, I was wondering when the green-eyed monster would appear. Polyamory is all very well, but human nature is what it is sometimes. Enjoying this hugely, darling xxxxx

Bobbi - do so love how the relationships are developing. The sub falling in love with the Mistress and wondering if the Mistress feels the same. Can a Mistress love a sub AND still manage to keep control of the D/s lifestyle? And btw... that lil exchange and flirting between Michelle and Emily in the bedroom was by far the sexxiest scene yet. Well Done !!

This sounds as if you've chucked a handful of Viagra into the pot to thicken the soup. And as for the ignited green-eyed monster, don't forget what happened to Desdemona and Othello---don't let this multiple relationship turn to crap and ruin the whole project. Keep it up, Bobbi, you've got this old fellow on tenterhooks.

This chapter seems to have missed something in the editing process as it swaps between first person, "I said", and third person, "Kathleen said".

Liking this story a lot.

However, it was more than a little disconcerting to face an abrupt shift from first person to third person POV. Had enjoyed the first person narrative, seemed more immersive while this is more distant.

Enticing develops, all around!

Apologies for the errors in the two chapters 17 & 18. I seemed to have got carried away. I had hoped and thought that I had straightened it out, but you know what thought did, thought wrong. I will try harder, sorry for spoiling the story for you.

Mmmh that may starts eating at a 60 year old ….. not the best for your mental healthy mind …. BUT honesty is the most important factor for trust …. Ok Paris, oh yeah a gem …. Using the metropolitan is one unique satisfaction so is the city and those old buildings or the little places caffee shops veg markets or bakerys or everything ….. and the beauty lies within the people and the extraordinary fashion style …. Mia and Em they will have fun

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