All Comments on 'The Party'

Your subtitle says it is a foursome, but with the wife fucking 4 guys, that is hard to reconcile.

Nothing tackier than whining about commenters,

The author is kind of feisty!

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I don't read stories where the writer whines about past comments. If you aren't ready to run with the big dogs stay on the porch.

Since this is your fourth story, I need to be more critical of the writing style.

You start with the first paragraph saying "...for my husband and I to get off ...", then in the second paragraph switch POV to the husband saying "My wife and I..."

Some of your sentences go nowhere, ie. "In this story's instance,"

There are some periods ending sentences, which are then followed by a sentence fragment such as "Andy, Ben, Chris, and the two of us." You should have used a comma in the preceding sentence.

I recommend using a word processor such as MS Word and pay attention to the app's warnings of such grammar and any spelling problems before you publish the story.

On a positive note, you story is rather good, but it needs more editing and patience to make it read better.

Instead of calling this category "loving wives" it should be called whore wives!!!

Really loving wifes nor my cup of tea.

No story just a predictable gang bang boring

Odiouser is very observant. This is just a cuck and skank story.

Hot story!

Pretty hot story but one I could personally never participate in . I’ve know people in various twisted sexual relationships but none seen to last. The guys that allowed the wife to dabble was only doing it because he was cheating all over her and didn’t care. Those rules are not people they know or close to home. Jealousy always pops up and then destruction. One couple that allowed away from home were at the neighbors party when their nephew was there and said holy shit I can’t believe you’re here . Grabbed and kissed her not realizing she’s with her family. Turned out on girls weekend she fucked him and his black college rugby teammate. Hubby overheard him telling the uncle they dped her all night and next morning. She couldn’t get enough of there college age cocks and her first black one. He said he’d show the videos . One was of her screaming as he pounded her ass making her say she love taking up her married mommy ass by his huge black cock. Hubby was humiliated and within a year was divorced she apparently started fucking anyone around their town after divorce. Kids were mortified, she loved young cock and lots of guys they knew were fucking her. Kudos to couples that can handle that lifestyle

Mmmmm... wonderful lifestyle indeed! Savour it as long as you can.

Deliciously written story - thanks for the boner and for igniting some great memories.

Rye

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