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All Comments on 'The Penthouse Ch. 02: The EX'

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shadysweetshadysweetalmost 2 years ago

I often like the second and third parts of a story, because they jump right into the action, like this one. :) This is a bit better, I like the premise and dynamic again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Much better chapter than the first one. It probably came across to me as dry/ clinical because of the information dump? This chapter is a vast improvement.

Tess (uk)

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Experienced poly dominant, involved in the local community for 20+ years. Have taught rope bondage in the local community and national events. Stories I write have some basis in my experience in BDSM, even the pure fiction ones have a basis in reality that I have done, seen, ...