All Comments on 'The Perfect Alpha Ch. 03'

Use “since” not “sense” - use “than” not “then”

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You have a point there, there can be no reason for them to just stop. I never even considered how long ago it had been SINCE the last one was killed.

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If anything I saw relief in a few faces probably had always wondered how I could be so much stronger THAN everyone else…

Good story and interesting, but could really use some editing. Keep up the good work!

A good chapter.

I’m really enjoying this different take on the Alpha/Wolf World!

I know there were a few errors in the writing, but I can forgive an awful lot for either great vocab use or for original thinking, you’ve definitely got me on the second, I look forward to watching where you take this and as generally happens with new writers how your craft grows and improves. Many thanks and good luck, cheers, Ppfzz. 5⭐️