All Comments on 'The Perfect Surrogate Pt. 01'

by ScreamQueen

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NutbutterbishNutbutterbish4 months ago

5-star story! I love your creative mind. โค๏ธ

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

i can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

he is one lucky bastard glad she is fighting

it

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great start!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Will this have stockhlom syndrome? Hope that the stockhlom syndrome will be slow that there will be a fight and that she will try to escape them. so that it is not immediately in the chapter 2.

Would be great to see her try to escape from them. Leave the house to run and get caught and punished. And after the punishment cuddling, aftercare..

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love this so far!! Hope you can update soon.. Would be great to see her leave the house and run. And them run after her and catch her. And she have a breakdown and them comfort her and tell her that it is her house and that they will be happy together. Hope the stockhlom syndrome will be slow and that they will slowly break her

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

interesting, for now it is difficult to find a good book, I hope that the book will not disappoint. I'm really looking forward to reading it, so far it's great ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I like the idea of the victim fighting back. Most of these stories are a diatribe of how the abducted becomes a mindless slave, doing their predators bidding. Please make this an actual story where things don't go as planned and the victim plots and plans and throws wrenches into their program. Humans are resilient and can take a punch and fight back. The captors want an asset, if the victim becomes a problem things tend to go wrong..

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Here we go again, cuffed and gagged before she knew what was happening. No one is cuffed and gagged that way and of course she's too dumb to fight back, but apparently a genius for breeding. Stupid out of the box.

Blueyes2022Blueyes20224 months ago

Not how kidnap, rape victims respond to captors.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I've loved your abduction and bondage stories, particularly the fag scenes, since reading Cheer Up, Charlie. This one joins the list of being among the best. Looking forward to reading more by you in the future!

TonyBeetsTonyBeets4 months ago

Fun story! I think she should adapt well to her surroundings, some of us dream of capture and sexual servitude, amazing chance to live a life of sex and leisure.

Mastersam1Mastersam14 months ago

Lovely story. Enjoyed a lot. Hoping for new chapters soon where Ivy will be collared and chained in that room with additional metal bondage while she will get impregnated.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Concept of the story is really hot, like the way that her body is described as betraying her but the speed of the betrayal and the way she was captured felt rushed and not enough thought put into it

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

We need moreee!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story! Would love to read part 2!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

God I neeeeeed more of this one itโ€™s like perfect for me the leg lifting at the end?

Please give us a follow up even a summary or like an epilogue

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