All Comments on 'The Plaything Ch. 01'

I loved the story and hope to see and imagine more of Danni!

But a bit too much to seem realistic.

It's definitely not realistic, DWornock. Not meant to be. Thanks for the comment!

Great story. Any chance you're planning to write about what happens when she returns to the party? Plenty of interesting characters here to explore.

Loved the plot and the characters having actual character, added a whole level to the eroticism. The reluctant aspect was played out very well. Look forward to seeing more of your work! *****

It really should have been more sexy and her like friend adam should have became her boyfriend and just put long stories in chapters too long

@steve1996, definitely planning to return to the story and write further chapters if people end up liking it.

@ElectricBadger, thanks a lot!

You kept getting your own characters mixed up putting he's after dani's thoughts or else she's when talking abot the guys holding dani or fucking her... learn to differentiate your characters In your own story/ies better!!!

Found it erotic and it didn't stray too far into the realms of fantasy so that it remained very believable and, for me, these are the sort of stories that I like the best.

I loved this. Left to read another story and said to myself ... fuck! Came back here and scored it. Thought I would comment that it is very well written. Her POV narration is spot on in my imagination of what this 'could' be like.

Reading it made me shake my head .. say 'shit' ... and go to the author page to see if you wrote more.

Thanks for a few minutes of sexual oblivion ...