All Comments on 'The Ponytail Express Ch. 16'

I really liked the story so far. But If you make Deb a hermaphrodite then im simply out. I can suspend my disbelief but if you are going to far as to say that his can make someone grow new sexual organs... thats more than a bit much thank you.

Yep nice dream fantasy but please don’t morph deb into a hermaphrodite. That is just too bizarre.

I liked how the story started but the last couple chapters are going weirdo out there and now one's parents....

I share the reservations expressed by others. Great character development, especially early. Nice story arc. The hot prospect of the bride(s) demanding slave collars instead of wedding rings. But lately things are feeling a bit ... hmm, desperate? The sudden ability to understand people speaking in other languages. The development of genitals that size of a baseball bat, which shoots fireballs or something into his partner. Hints of Deb's evolution. It would be really nice to avoid going further down this path.

It brought to mind the ancient history of the Dick Tracy comics when the long-time crime fighter suddenly had a Elon Musk character transport a girl (Moon Maid) from the moon. Antennae. Telepathy. Fireballs, Heat rays. Whatever they needed this week suddenly appeared. Married Tracy's son, got pregnant, gave birth to Honeymoon, killed by a car bomb. In short, sort of messed with the franchise.