All Comments on 'The Princess and the Jester'

While there's nothing wrong with your writing, picture this.

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The wicked queen tells the huntsman to take Snow White out into the woods to kill her.

He takes her out and leaves her where she eventually runs into the Seven Dwarfs.

Her and the dwarfs live the rest of their lives happily ever after never seeing or hearing from the queen ever again.

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While it works, lack of strife makes for a story that just floats down river without any rapids.