by rumpleminty
You seem to have a particularly strong obsession with pornography actresses.
I really like this story. Just a suggestion. At some point in each chapter say the women's full name as a reminder not just the first names
Hot stuff. loving this series so far and I’m looking forward to the next instalment.
Truely enjoying this series, it's sexy, fun, some drama between the girls. Looking forwards to the next installment
I loved this chapter. You are bringing out everyone's personality which is enjoyable to read. When you start rooting for someone in a story the author is doing a good job
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On to the next chapter
You are writing an incredibly hot and impressive story. I am so excited that you managed to give each girl a real personality all the way down to being jealous of each other for getting to Andy first. The way you had those brothers act was exactly as I think everyone would have expected after the way they acted before they got to the island. I hate “Bro’s” like that. They remind me of many frat boys I came across during college and they make most normal peoples skin crawl but the worst part is that they never grow up and always act like that (shudder) ick.