All Comments on 'The Prize Day 02'

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francemanfrancemanover 2 years ago

You seem to have a particularly strong obsession with pornography actresses.

JohnDoh69JohnDoh69over 2 years ago

I really like this story. Just a suggestion. At some point in each chapter say the women's full name as a reminder not just the first names

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot stuff. loving this series so far and I’m looking forward to the next instalment.

SampsinnMoonCalledSampsinnMoonCalledover 2 years ago

Truely enjoying this series, it's sexy, fun, some drama between the girls. Looking forwards to the next installment

Bronco56Bronco56over 2 years ago

I loved this chapter. You are bringing out everyone's personality which is enjoyable to read. When you start rooting for someone in a story the author is doing a good job

5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

On to the next chapter

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Love these types of stories!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You are writing an incredibly hot and impressive story. I am so excited that you managed to give each girl a real personality all the way down to being jealous of each other for getting to Andy first. The way you had those brothers act was exactly as I think everyone would have expected after the way they acted before they got to the island. I hate “Bro’s” like that. They remind me of many frat boys I came across during college and they make most normal peoples skin crawl but the worst part is that they never grow up and always act like that (shudder) ick.

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