All Comments on 'The Proposal'

A wonderful story about a beautiful girl rescued from loneliness. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.

This is romance as well as group

Amazing story. I loved it. Quite hot - and romantic, also! Well done!

Great story. Real emotions. Real romance. Still questions of Alice and Wil's family? And what of children?

A beautiful read. Just couldn’t put it down. It was well worth the read. Thank you.

Lonely girl rescued by weathy vacuous couple. I’m not sure I buy it, although I’m normally a great fan of your writing. They’re moving her into their house and effectively isolating her from any chance of developing her independence and maturity. Housework and bondage sessions?

I couldn't wait to finish, to see where the story would go. The sign of great writing; congratulations, so well done.

What an amazing story! Warm, heartfelt and sexy as hell! Beautiful job writing it.

I would like to have read more of this, but your punctuation is bordering on atrocious. Not just mistakes... downright irritating.

Sorry, 1 star, because you can't be arsed to get it right. I'm actually surprised this passed publication.

Loved the story, couldn't stop reading.

Thank you