All Comments on 'The Proposal'

Loved the story, couldn't stop reading.

Thank you

I would like to have read more of this, but your punctuation is bordering on atrocious. Not just mistakes... downright irritating.

Sorry, 1 star, because you can't be arsed to get it right. I'm actually surprised this passed publication.

What an amazing story! Warm, heartfelt and sexy as hell! Beautiful job writing it.

I couldn't wait to finish, to see where the story would go. The sign of great writing; congratulations, so well done.

Lonely girl rescued by weathy vacuous couple. I’m not sure I buy it, although I’m normally a great fan of your writing. They’re moving her into their house and effectively isolating her from any chance of developing her independence and maturity. Housework and bondage sessions?

A beautiful read. Just couldn’t put it down. It was well worth the read. Thank you.

Great story. Real emotions. Real romance. Still questions of Alice and Wil's family? And what of children?

Amazing story. I loved it. Quite hot - and romantic, also! Well done!

This is romance as well as group

A wonderful story about a beautiful girl rescued from loneliness. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.