All Comments on 'The Proposition Pt. 01'

A year is way, way too long. Monthly would be the right amount!

Could do with reading up on bra sizing. 42 band size is for an extremely thick, high body-fat upper torso, maybe 40-50 pounds overweight or so. a 34D would be insanely hot. a 42 anything, far, far less so. Also at one point you briefly switched to first person, then back again to the way you had it the rest of the story.

I have no idea why it's in this category. Stepmom is not incest, no matter how many times she calls him her son, or he calls her 'mommy'. It's just roleplaying.

Felt like cuck shit. No romance or affection, just cheaters.