All Comments on 'The Punishment Room Pt. 03'

by J_Birkenzweig

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ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 4 years ago

I get the idea, and like the story, but the story isn't about the room.

BangbaeBangbaealmost 4 years ago

I, for the life of me, can't figure out if they are acquaintances or not ?

J_BirkenzweigJ_Birkenzweigalmost 4 years agoAuthor
acquaintances

When I wrote the story I didn't think there could be any doubt regarding that question but since several people brought this up I obviously have to try and figure out why I did not get that idea across that clearly.

Thanks goes out to Anonymus, since I have received a thorough review of part two with errors pointed out and suggested improvements, which I used in the parts to come. Part four is pending and so will appear mid next week.

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