All Comments on 'The Relationship Pt. 10'

I really enjoy this series. It's rare to find these kind of stories from a woman's perspective, and while I think they're could've been more plumbing of the depths, I enjoy the ride. I like the angst. The turmoil. The journey from what was to what will (must? ) be.

I do feel this is not an ending, as the relationship seems to not have reached on equilibrium, for that reason I feel there's more to be unearthed. I do hope that the author chooses to explore it more.

In any case, brava!! And thank you for sharing. Good luck with the writing going forward, wherever it leads you ^_^

I think the series was OK, but would have liked there to be an epilogue or next chapter about her and Jim going to his mother's, perhaps the mother passes away. Then the wife sees how strong Jim is as he arranges the funeral and acts as the emotional rock for the family. The wife then gets to "repay" Jim for his devotion and sees what kind of man he is and that she fell in love with him not his cock.

So the words The End……does that mean the series is over?

I loved the whole series and couldn’t wait for the next part each time.

However, the longer the series went the more I started to despise the wife. She obviously knew how much pain she was inflicting on her husband.

Then in this chapter she gets jealous and goes to him for emotional support after all she has done to him? That’s insanely selfish. Not to mention never going to see Jim’s mom who is sick because she was too busy with her boyfriend.

Now she knows how Jim hurts and instead of being there for him, keeps piling it on.

At this point I’m ready for Jim to divorce her and for Eric to end up with Judy. That would leave this wife with nothing after demanding she have everything.

Quite the odd character development, honestly.

'' But I knew it still hurt him. I realized for a moment that I was starting to see things from his perspective. When I watched Eric fuck Judy in ways he didn't fuck me. Was that what it was like for Jim?''

To

''He pulled out his little penis as Eric fucked me. I looked from Jim to Eric and then told Eric, "I love you and your big cock."

You'd think she'd have more sympathy for her husband after witnessing Judy with Eric, but no. Quite the whipplash indeed. Not to mention her being really damn selfish.

1/5.

What a selfish slut.