All Comments on 'The Reversal'

Consider an editor.

Agree with Bigfundrew, an editor would be so helpful. The misspellings are entertaining, but don't detract from the content. Enjoyed the read. 4 stars

WS

Would be ok except that he liked being treated that way. Pathetic.

Less than 1

Or, consider finding another hobby.

Yes, get an editor! It's "since," not "sense."

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Gained a star for knocking up the bull's wife, but still cuck shit.

So uninteresting. You set CUCK stories back 1,000 years. If for some reason you decide to grace these pages with this crap....DON't

An editor, and some therapy might improve things for you

"placed a metal mush between us", Metal mush? Is that like steel oatmeal or something? Yes, I know you meant mesh, but it's difficult to get turned on when I'm laughing. Please find a proofreader.

Semen is different from seamen. Women is the plural of woman. Learn your language.

Love the result. Wouldn't mind a follow up about how her getting pregnant destroyed the spouses and causes A switching of roles.

Consider psychiatric help.

Ha! Mark is actually the winner here! I like this one!

Consider suicide. You put up with that shit for three years? five minutes would be too long.

10 star but still a dumbass cuckold for tolerating being put down. Need part 2 Janae name's the child not after Tim but the real father. Have you got the balls to write about that?

Even the idea of a 'payback', such as it is, was not enough to salvage this dismal view of a man who thinks so little of himself. It is unimaginable to want to subjugate yourself to the humiliation of anyone, much less to your own spouse and her lover. This perfectly describes the concept of cuckoldry and fetishism and why these stories don't belong in Loving Wives, AND why they provided a category specifically for fetish related stories to begin with.

Yuck. Are there really "men" out there who enjoy this lifestyle?

First time I was released from restraints like that? Tied up by my wife and her "bull"?

Well...afterwards I'd probably be found guilty of at least manslaughter. And there'd be two dead people.

It really is a pathetic existence.

Ohhhhhh, nooooo.... [face palm]

Stupid

Well done!!!! It would be nice to know what happened next to the bull and the wife... ;)

Totally hillarious becuse of the many, many errors in editing!

Sorry, but that was horrible … and what ship were all those bloody seamen coming from?

Story was a terrible fantasy with no reference to reality. However, it was original and unique and for that it deserves a 4* grade.

... no dea what to think of this story.

Wouldn't a truly willing cuckold be completely against the idea of it impregnating the 'property' of his wife's bull? And, if not, wouldn't such an action force him to seriously rethink his lifestyle and move on from being a cuck?

You would think so... but, then again, I obviously put more thoughts in it than even the author. So... ultimately not that important.

Uh, no. Not even a little bit.

Yes, you need to do some more editing, but...

That was a fun story! I will definitely look for more from you. The cuck in me found the twist quite amusing. I'm not sure I would be concerned or interested in getting her pregnant, so much as just too horny to not get some pussy. lol

Still too much cuck, the locked in dog cages killed it.

Did someone farted?!

Captcha

Nice try, I guess? Still Fag Cuck Shit. Thanks for the effort.

This story could only work if his i.pregnating the other cuck would stir his inner bull. Thus completing the reversal. Big dicked bull has trouble getting hard after being outclassed by a cuck. And the cuck starts to enjoy sadism more than humiliation.

Uh, yeah, a proof reader or an editor would at least make your story more palatable. As, don’t write about erotica. Just don’t.

Great reversal!

complete nonsense.

Yuck what a fuck

I thought (my mistake) that he was going to grow balls and stop being a sissy

You are one hell of a sick bastard.

Ignore the anonymous cowards. I liked your story. Thank you for sharing it.

Silly but fun

Funny.

Sigh, I'd hoped...but no.

You could have at least had the decency to write about the fallout when the assholes found out about the pregnancy.

What a load of crap.

utter rubbish

Congratulations, you get the trifecta. Stupid, ugly, and pathetic

Yeh, the coup de grace would have been the wankers finding out Tim had succeeded.

That would have blown away his wife's fertility BS crap.