All Comments on 'The Ride Home Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
No mind control .

Nothing at all . no sex

sinsinnati63sinsinnati63over 6 years agoAuthor
No sex in first portion

Yeah, its a multi-part story and the next 4 chapters haven't been approved yet. The setup runs long... too long probably. I hope you'll find the payoff worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Long setups are fine

Long setups are fine. Some of the very best EMC stories have them. Nothing more boring than here's a girl, bam she's controlled and having sex. A dime a dozen. Do your story exactly as you wish.

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