All Comments on 'The Ring of Anubis Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Interesting read, though still packed with the most unlikeable characters imaginable. It would have been good if he’d managed to develop one or two non-coercive relationships or found someone where the sex was based on something other than hate. The drink is Champagne, even in US English

EricBrooksEricBrooks4 months ago

Give us more!!!!!!!!

OgfyOgfy4 months ago

A suggestion. Can you link the rest of the story properly in order of the read? I see you have the other parts listed.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

You're really a good author, I enjoy your stuff...any chance you can finish your "Ring of Suggestion" story?

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Everyone is a critic these days. If you don’t like the way the story reads then find one you do like or better yet, write your own. Enjoy, jerk off and have fun!

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