by Kinkynfit
Interesting read, though still packed with the most unlikeable characters imaginable. It would have been good if he’d managed to develop one or two non-coercive relationships or found someone where the sex was based on something other than hate. The drink is Champagne, even in US English
A suggestion. Can you link the rest of the story properly in order of the read? I see you have the other parts listed.
You're really a good author, I enjoy your stuff...any chance you can finish your "Ring of Suggestion" story?