All Comments on 'The Ring of Kings Pt. 03'

I/T can be really sizzling, right up until the point it becomes a harem story, then all the 'forbidden' secret stuff goes right out the window. Classic mistake, made far too often.

Anonymous- then it is a good thing that this is a SciFi/Fantasy story and not an Incest/Taboo story, then, isn't it.

I really so against all this, why isnt he trying to remove his finger hand arm walk infront of a truck?

Anonymous the second - because if he did, there would be no story. Listen, if you don't like the story, you are not forced to read it. If you can suspend disbelief (which you have to do with every story submitted to literotica) then you might enjoy the story. I just want people to take it for what it is. This is my attempt at creating a redeemable character.