All Comments on 'The Ripple Effect Pt. 02'

I’m thinking Olivia really struggles with her new situation and her babysitters have to put her in pull-ups like a real diaper girl

Some of the story was quite creative and therefore enjoyable. But others just defied what people would normally do. ie people actually working would react quickly and would identify what needed to be done. Not just stand back and gawk like retarded 16 year olds. There would be plenty of clothing items that could have been used to cover up those exposed. Plus, that DA giving an "upskirt" view... well her aids would have noticed what was being seen by the camera and immediately walked on with a glass/bottle of water and as they handed it to her quietly mentioned the cameras could see her pink panties!

But the really bad point was the "Clit piercing". Women seldom have their clits pierced. Why not? Cause piercing the clit causes permanent nerve damage, therefore a dramatic loss of sensation in the clit and the nerves cannot grow back. It is permanent. Tatto/Piercing shops seldom do it and then only if they get signed legal wavers, to prove they passed on all the possible consequences to avoid being sued once the woman realises the results of the piercings. Imagine if some high libido woman gets it pierced and afterwards, seldom has an orgasm as most of the sensation has left her clit? Yes, I know they are only stories on Literotica but stupid men read it and decide they want their woman to have it done. No, it is the Hood that gets pierced, with the ball stimulating the clit, keeping her aroused.

Fantastic!

Love the domino style escalation of the exposure. Sure it was unrealistic, but that's the fun of a fictional story, Anything can happen and characters routinely act out of, well character. Although saying the staff would have snapped into action does not take into account the extreme levels of ball busting bitch the candidate was to said staff. Looking forward to chapter three, two main leads have yet to have their exposure.

It has been too long since I read a proper ENF story! Thank you so much for writing it!

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Hopefully will read more of your stuff in the future!

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I like the happy end for characters after there humiliation

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want will Danny do next maybe his father really agress for Sarah to work naked (and Sopie too)or they change the swimsuit agianst a a water dissolving one

i had a idear for Maria she makes a stupid bet about football game that could be held in springhurst against her nemesis/rival reporter a bitch that taunts her every time they meet provokes her enouth for her to say if there hometeam would loose she would broadcasted in the winners locker room naked (the chances are astronomical low for the guestteam to win but what she does not know is that many of the good players are not present do to a missed flight so it becomes a even fight lots of taunting between Maria her rival and the choach and the enemy team what makes Maria and her Rival so mad frustated to up the bet that the looser would not only strip naked in the locker room but fuck the whole winner team live on air ) her Rival could be from the same state as the guest team and she knows that the bought a new star quaterback so she is sure/arrogant enought to win

so she make more demands for things like how the high the score is that their team has more touchdowns So that it is regardless who you decide to win both have to do something humilating to do in public (gangbang is the harder one but the °Winner° has to do something like dirty talk the whole time to the audiance saying: ° what a slut she is imagening all the jerking to her of every horny boy every horny man °strip completly naked and bent over and spread their asschecks wiggle their tits and suck the dildo seductivly and masturbate on the yard)

Also Olivia gets revenge agiainst the cheerleaders that mocked her by switching ther Uniform against ones that easly rip apart during there Cheer routine. Sopie could also end up naked. english not first languege sorry

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I will judge the Character Arcs on there own

Olivia 2/10 only 2 points because her live is in danger and no on cares really! Her Mother cares more about something extremly petty then for the live of her own Daughter!😒Next in Line is her Cheerleader Nemises who has no name other the Bitch😉, David was the only one that acted like a human and saved it for me. The furious Religion stuff was overdone (see Mother Point) padding the bra was weird(kink but not the kink many like to read) and comparing her body to a girl made Oliva not erotic at all i came to see humiliated sexy Woman not nearly dieing girls.

Next because it Fulfills what i came for Maria 7/10 Sarah 8/10 the middle is the best part tension and losing clothes happens more organicly, , saving of Maria felt more like a real rescue. People are not complet troglodytes(except Danny and gang) Sarahs and Marias Character come out more then Olivias also Sarahs dynamic with Alex works.Description is more explicit like Sarahs wide asshole and jusiy pussy and Marias Roastbeef pussy lips infront of cameras😘 and college guys and coworkers, its so hot best humiliation of the three parts.Alex being saved from Sarah(and getting a crush) and becoming liveguard because of it paid of so well in all regards.👍

Now to the end Lauren 6/10 her having no motivation of becoming Politician and being a hyperslut made it less entertaining but she has sex and dirty sex so it makes it better.

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One of my favorite ENF stories