All Comments on 'The Road Trip Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

But... 38JJ? Aw, c'mon.

Sex was too rushed. Boom, zipper down, cock in mouth. What's the rush? Details needed. Why didn't she reach over to his bulge and play with it a while before unzipping him? Great opportunity for discussion about how he liked her tits. How he got hard just looking at them. Can he imagine what it'd be like to see them? Touch them? Play with them? Lick them? Suck them? Titty fuck them?

When she unzipped him there was opportunity for more touching and playing with his cock. Describing it. How she liked it. What she was going to do to it.

No indication of any furure reciprocity when they got to the hotel. Story just ends.

Had chance to be a rel winner.

Four stars -- being generous.

titsucker69titsucker69over 2 years agoAuthor

It's a true story ... bust size is actual.... Sorry, you got that wrong!!!!

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