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D1noSlayerD1noSlayer8 months ago

I know that it's too late to change the story now, but it feels off to have both Liam and Marie be subby (as the initial protagonists). With Liam, I can kinda see what you're going for, but a) I feel like you leaned too much into Blake's submissiveness and kinkiness for her to dom Liam and make it seem natural b) Liam feels too innocent to pull off a proper sub, would seem more natural to me if he were trained to top and c) while I don't mind pegging and femdom in general, I prefer variety (and not have both the main couples be femdom)

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The next chapters of "The Camgirl" are up on the Patreon page. You can get early access to the most recent chapters on the $5 tier, and there are two more tiers now, each with stories about characters that appear in "The Camgirl". I try to achieve a blend of smutty and wholes...