All Comments on 'The Sales Lady Ch. 05'

This is a very good continuation of the story...and again, sexy and romantic. However, it could have used a bit more proofreading--in that certain words were not correct or lines were a bit confusing....as in the line..."do you know what he asked her"...like a 3rd person when they were conversing in the shower about the water.... It is a minor point--but the wording and the craftmanship of the other segments was very good...this one may have been a bit "hurried". Still a great story!

*****That was a sexy shower. Thanks for sharing.