All Comments on 'The Scorned Young Woman Pt. 04'

I do think you have made this really good part after part, but didn’t like that last line “ I really need a place to stay." that was not called for by such a “ good girl “.

I appreciate a writer that will take a reflective look at the real aspects of this relationship. STDs ARE a fact of life in our society. Being caring and responsible, even in the throes of lust, is difficult but essential for a meaningful and enduring relationship. This series of stories shows tremendous promise!

Always a nice fantasy young woman older man(that would be me). A caring daughter relenting to her friends needs, to a caring man and his dick works well as well. I didn't think the std thing in a divorce would be so important but what do I know.

Now let the good times roll or back to being the hood ornament of my car ugh 🚗