All Comments on 'The Second Day of Spring Break'

The disconnected storytelling is increasingly distracting. Was Ben fucked by Dillon and teammates in the locker room or not? Ben and his cousin had already jacked each other off and fucked when Ben took cousin’s ass the first time roughly (even though this chapter said they had yet to be physical). Was his cousin Ben’s first fuck? And still Cousin continued to realize that Ben was jealous, yet kept gaslighting him about it being only sex with Dillon (no feelings), off and on, until he finally says “let’s be a throuple!” The details matter and the disconnects are decreasing the overall enjoyment of the story.