All Comments on 'The Seduction of Ms Manners'

WOW!, HOT. But I’m glad you took your writing the back story. It deserves a lot more fucking et al. I want more scenes in the club. Chrissy

Thank you Chrissy. I've focused on removing more of the background detail, and he takes full advantage of Ms Manners. She is an incredibly powerful litigator but becomes an incredibly willing slut. Let me know what you would like to see, just adding background supporting her willingness to make herself available. But I've just introduced Karen, she is a sensitive soul , some Daddy issues Paul is uncomfortable with but takes her brutally in the next chapter. Thank you for the encouragement. Best as always, Nollaig.

How do you picture the Club and its purpose? Just so you know, it is owned by Paul. Highly exclusive. Private rooms. A place to reflect, a voyeurs paradise. It has a dark room. One person enters from one side, another door is in a different part of the Club. The individuals have outlined an experience, the Club makes it happen. Men and women who enter, know absolutely that boundaries will never be crossed. It can be an impulse request, to be fingered by a complete stranger. He must be married, a big man. And he will not speak. The Club arranges it in minutes, the woman can decline, or encouraged by her pears, enter the room. Her account would be charged for bottles of bubbly, depending on the complexity of the request. What would you ask for Chrissy? I'll include just for you? Best Nollaig

An excellent initial story. Nicely structured, recognising that sometimes the jockey needs a stable groom to get the mares ready for superior performance. But could this woman's fantasies - now that she is liberated - direct her to maybe surrender to a chastity belt, concealed beneath her evening costumes?

She is a liberated, thats for sure. She has such an incredibly demanding position, long hours during trials is that how it now progresses, she makes Paul aware when she is unexpectedly available, understanding he has little spare time, but he always makes arrangements to meet her, even if it is a stolen hour. He pushes her, selecting quite poor run down hotels in known sex quarters, where she is completely out of her comfort zone, clearly she is noticed and he would even make her have to ask at the grubby reception, that she was meeting Mr M. Aster and he would fuck her, ticking off her desired experiences. He had her with anal trainers inside her on the London tube and no panties whilst in court. I'll certainly investigate chastity belts to see if that would be appropriate for her?