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All Comments on 'The Sienna Incident'

by MidsummerKnight

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MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

Liked it for the outrageously funny scene — can easily imagine being there. On the down side, for a shortish piece seemed long winded to get to the climax.

MidsummerKnightMidsummerKnightover 1 year agoAuthor

Having read it and re-read this piece fat too many times, I agree. It's long winded for the pay off. Hey ho. May delete and rework. :)

Probus888Probus888over 1 year ago

Was that really a true story (even with a bit of creative license)? Wow, that was so brave. If so, you've had an interesting life. Another 5* from me!

MidsummerKnightMidsummerKnightover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you, Probus888! Very kind of you!

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After a brief foray into popular music some 25 years ago, I returned to the real world and, thereafter, worked in Banking and IT for 15 years. Four years ago, I decided I'd had enough of being a small cog in a big Corporate mechanism and quit my day job to get married and star...