All Comments on 'The Sky Kingdom Ch. 14'

Loving this story so far, can’t wait for the next chapter!

Really loving this story so far, can’t wait for the next chapter!

Ooh, I'm happy you explained the islands. I thought the whole city was floating.

Lovely story, stream of events, plenty of suspense and intrigue, hot sex!

14 entries so far and not I would call weak. Great work.

your words bring life to a colorful world. Thank you

I would've thought Scarlett might've been wanting to start training Henry to do anal so he would be ready for "Font"-ing Emily?

Wonderful story

One of those rare erotic reads where I am actually more interested in the story than the sex.

The master and ”slave” sexual play that has been created between Harry and his ladies is a delightful piece of work and a great read. Particularly with the little minx Scarlett now and anticipating with both as their relationships evolve. Bravos.

who knew that a dominant simp could be such a thing.. he would be a sub if not for his position among the royal family..

First chapter slavegirl was the tag..... now femdom? Please get your head right. This male being submissive is gross especially in a bland sex scene.

Awesome story so far. Every chapter has gotten better and better!

I love the story, but I think you would benefit from a better editor. I’d gladly volunteer to proofread before you post or after if you would like the help.

Nonconsent?.. she is totally in control. Why do women like man who are that insecure, sometimes even spineless? She had to protect him against his dad… the guy is 21 and doesn’t understand how the world works. That is impossible because of his status. Politics, history and magic would be just as important as foreign languages. I hoped that he would be a fast learner, but that is not the case. Even in public he can’t take control of a situation. My goodness what a whimp. It’s him that should be fucked during powertransfers. No real slave would accept him as a master.