All Comments on 'The Sky Kingdom Ch. 15'

Love this story, can’t wait to read more about this world. I think Harry’s naivety with his slave(s) is going to get him into a lot of trouble and maby draw some unwanted attention.

You're doing a great job of fleshing out this fascinating world you've created.

There's a lot of potential here, with the court intrigue, training at the academy, Emily and Scarlett's past, and Price Henry's intriguing future.

Looking forward to reading many more chapters!

Loved it! Borrowed a small scene from Pretty Woman, but it's all for the better.

Enjoyed it greatly! Though, I'd love to read on Henry and Scarlett using the font bench to eventually get scarlett over her trauma and fear. Maybe her playing with Henry chained first? But its your story. Let to lead where you type it goes. Much enjoyment reading from me.

This is the only story that I come to this site for thx u you should make it more public like posting on novel Updates

Thank you for all your comments and I’ll certainly open to exploring some of these ideas!

I’m not entirely sure what novel updates is, are you able to enlighten me?

Happy to correspond with anyone who wants to send a private message.

I miss Emily

Simply exceptional. The erotic sm of the characters has been done so well, and now the mysteries of the plot are coming to the front. Great read.

It's too bad you ruined this by turning him submissive.

Spending money at their store will sure teach them

this submissive prince that needs to be lead into assuming dominance, is just a character in conflict with himself, not truely appreciating the gravity and weight of the responsibility he has to bare.. honestly at this point, learning that he becomes a back door princess later on wont Suprise me.. he is at conflict with himself, and I honestly think that's due to the evidently soft life, and weak ideology he seems to harbor to feel good about himself as being right, as proof that his father is wrong.. he is turning this story into being less appealing, which is disappointing, because it genuinely had potential in the beginning.. scarlet on the other hand is just awesome and well written.

Not a fan of the Pretry Woman scene. It was obvious, poorly done and out of character. Also the whole, “I’m a slave and you’re being nice to me?!” bit is getting old. Obviously he made dinner reservations for the two of you. Stop being obtuse.

Ass a gay guy I'm offended. Please don't make lead characters bottoms without warning in chapter 1

Really enjoying the complex dynamics, well written.