All Comments on 'The Slave Emporium Pt. 02: Slave Girl Sara'

Really good story, looking forward to reading more but do find the child speak quite off putting-one minute it’s Willy and the next it’s cock then it’s bum and tummy. Sounds like something a toddler would say,

Thank you for your comment Sir, in private. play, i would say cock, but would prefer to say willy, having 2 brothers its what it was called.

Again, bottom or bum normally, bummy in private/play.

Tummy is tummy, not got another word for that Sir.

Again thank you for your tips on story writing, appreciated, sara brown xx