All Comments on 'The Slavery of Cleo Ch. 01'

Keep going!

She going to enjoy her kidnapping and rape. All these sluts are the same.

Looking forward to her adventure...

For a first attempt, I thought it was really good. Take no notice of the anon comment, that was just nasty for the sake of being nasty. This site doesn't allow over the top traumatising rapes, I myself very much enjoy reluctant pleasure stories and this has started out with a more unique start than most.

BTW I have seen some terrible starts on what became stellar story lines. "The reluctant slave" started out dreadful and I cringed at some of the ridiculing comments left behind. After that the improvement was staggering, then the plot got lost along with the author but that's life.

You have some talent, now you have to practice!

Love the first chapter, really looking forward to future installments