All Comments on 'The Snowstorm'

Grateful for ebony lesbian stories that aren’t stereotypical “ghetto” girl scenarios. Keep it up!

Loved this and being a first story... I do wish it had been longer and with more sexual fun; being snowed in and all, but it was still fun to read. I hope you not only continue writing Literotica stories, but you consider, once the snow melts (or perhaps not), more chapters with these two.

Short and passionate

The pacing was a little rushed, I would have enjoyed a little more buildup

Sexy ! Would love more descriptions! Cannot wait for the next story

Can't help but wonder if Jae's watching Discovery Channel because she's about to "discover something" in her relationship with her best friend. If that was intentional, nicely played! All in all a solid first story. Looking forward to more with these two.