by Midnight_owl21
Nice to see you back with a fresh update. The I’m really starting to like ethan, he’s a bit of a stiff, but it seems like Kodi is good for him.
Can’t wait to read more.
This story is basic. The character are generic and lackluster. The pace is painfully slow with no character development to keep you invested in the flow of events. The most interesting character is Fran and she’s the damn antagonist. For a girl that wants to better life on earth she sure doesn’t show it. And where did the dom sub interest come from?