All Comments on 'The Sperm Bank Ch. 02'

Don't get me wrong, this is a very seductive femdom scene. Well written and erotic. My only complaint is that it didn't have any plot to connect it to the first chapter other than the characters names. You can put any name to the characters and post it on BDSM as a stand alone. But I did enjoy it as a scene. Thanks.

Really thrilled when you post new stuff. I am glad you worked legs back into this one!

I have to agree that this was okay and totally needed more tie to the previous chapter. I really think the questions the poster gave you on the last chapter need to be answered and would help to make the story better.

I hope you continue to write more about this couple. I love the way she is controlling him. I would love to be in his place.