All Comments on 'The Spirit of King's Park'

by izumib27

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SlofredSlofredalmost 4 years ago

This is a fun story. Please continue. I want to know more about the Sprite.... and her interaction with the human world.

izumib27izumib27almost 4 years agoAuthor

Thank you! There will be quite a bit more; I have a lot of story to tell. I'm submitting one entry per week.

DwarfyJoeDwarfyJoeover 3 years ago

Love this story and the unexpected fantasy turn from the first part. Feel like the housekeeper in the maid outfit is a little overboard, like a bit of realism even in fantasy stories. But it's all really hot.

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