All Comments on 'The Spoils of War Ch. 05'

Masterpiece!

An excellent story with the potential to build into one of the great Literotica stories.

Well developed characters and story line with some interesting tension building and plot twists.

My only negative is minor frustration at the time taken to publish each chapter - 275 days for five chapters. Well, they do say that great art takes time.

Thank you, Master. This slave will try to work faster.

Beautiful work. Looking forward to the next chapters!

New chapter when?? I hope our slave girl can endure what's coming!