All Comments on 'The Spur Ch. 05'

Erotic. Pleasant. Predictable. The "activities" were not unusual

Thanks for the feedback, bobbycull55. I guess I have taken Stephen Sondheim's lyric to heart: "Anything you do / Let it come from you / Then it will be new." But I suppose it couldn't hurt to exercise my imagination on more out-of-the-way goings-on.

Although there wasn’t truly anything unexpected the entire scene is described vividly and believably. What was concerning to me was that she was apparently wearing clover clamps for a few hours! The reality is that 30mins is about the maximum amount of time that any clamps should be used for, in her case it should have been less than that because it was new to her.

Am enjoying the story, thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

Thanks, Tess; I can see how you would conclude that about the clamps from the way I wrote the story. I will definitely revisit that in a future incarnation!