All Comments on 'The Storm Before The Calm'

Wow!!! A real-life tale with human emotion, explosive sex, and the inevitable crash landing... Most excellent ShadySweet!!! 5- STARS for that tale...

Pray tell, how do you wear a knee length dress, with thigh high hose and have skin exposed between them?

LOVED THIS! <3 Jordan's a tool bag so good for Holly!

@Anonymous: A very short dress... we're talking right below the cheeksters and the stockings aren't that high, right over the knee, duh. ;)

Wow, well written! Five stars, confused as to why the rating is so low, this is a great story with good dynamic!

For the user who didn't like the character touching the expanse of skin between the stockings and skirt, fair enough. Maybe it could be reworded to emphasize that the expanse is between the stockings and her underwear. But realistically, some skin could well be showing between the stockings and skirt. The dude's hands are under it, and he's taller, which tends to lift the skirt.

It prefer a less literal-minded approach, as illustrated using the old school singsong: "The hem of the skirt moves up and down. Up and down. Up and down."

That felt so real — well crafted, great dialogue and sex that was part-parcel of the storyline rather than a gratuitous sidebar. Nice. xxxxx

I can actually imagining the confrontation happening just as you depicted — wired, uncontrolled and humorous if not so sad. Well crafted piece. Thanks for sharing. xxxxx

Awesome sexy story. I hope he goes up and bangs his wife. I think I’ll go shoot one out myself.

I've read just a couple of your previous stories and, although I liked them, I couldn't give them the 5 stars they might have deserved. I've given you those 5 stars here. Hang onto those exceptional editors and don't let go!

Very good

Is this the romantic spice that livens up a dull marriage or life? Desperate actions and unforseen consequences...