All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom Pt. 06'

You have your way with words. Quite cinematic.

Oh my god! So darned erotic and so very, very naughty!

I love it!

That is one of the most powerful and erotic stories I have ever read, The way Marcia takes possession of the pastor's wife is told with such force and imagination that it is easy to forget the first page, which is a tour de force in its own right.

Wow! Wow! Wow! You say you're bicurious, but that's difficult to believe reading this steamy account of two women in lust with each other. Do I detect a possible long-term relationship between the two of them, or do I detect Marcia plotting away at a coup to depose the older dyke and instal herself as Queen Bee in this church? And is one church enough to satisfy this woman's ambitions? A whole cluster of them, maybe. Nationwide?

I read this on a train and suffice to say I needed to leave my seat for 10 minutes to deal with something that had just come up!

PLEASE!DON’T!STOP!

OMG! It reminds me so much of a church I was once in! That was a bit of a nightmare for those caught up in the web of deceit, whilst yours is a gloriously sassy and funny satire. More, please. It's sooo cathartic.

I'm not a lesbian, but I am bicurious too. This story has really opened my eyes to the possobilities of same-sex love. I want to thank you, but I cannot hang around, as I must read your other stories! xxx

Thank you very much, everyone. Your encouragement is a great inspiration to me when I'm battling writer's block. xxooxx