All Comments on 'The Succubus'

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 5 years ago

I think it's an interesting premise - billionaire buys genetically-designed sex slave with zero rights - but in your story, she also has zero personality. She doesn't talk, she doesn't make any sounds, she doesn't resist, she simply obeys. Might as well get a robot or plastic sex doll. Anyway, it felt kind of flat because of that.

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