All Comments on 'The Surprise Ch. 04'

that she, not makes love, has sex with. Too ground down into a position where he will accept degradings terms and pain so so that the slug, who in all likelyhood not be able to get a man not tied down and only feels superior in degrading her victim can have some form of sex. Never anything that might involve pleasure between a man and a woman, just the same brainwashed male being happy in not being beaten severely.

Wow if that is not a recipe for hot sex I can't think of what is. The same type of tender care of sex between a donkey and a woman. Reading this makes me think that any and all pain & forced sex between the beaten slut female and any male is ok, just to make things equal.

To the previous commenter: I liked this story. If femdom isn't something you like to read about then don't. But please spare those of us who do your snide remarks.

To the author: Excellent story so far. Please hurry and give us the next section!

Thank you all who have read and endjoyed this story so far. There are a couple more parts to go but because of a corrupted harddrive my computer is in the shop and so it will take a bit longer than I had anticipated.

I had hoped to keep it to a one week schedule but that has been blown out of the water so I will get it out to you as soon as I possibly can. Please forgive the delay and keep checking back. The story will have a satisfactory ending... Trust me.

Thank you for your patience and understanding. I love you all.

To those few people who do not care for the subject matter I would like to ask you one question.... WHY the hell are you reading a story that is clearly labeled BDSM? If that isn't your bag.... DON'T READ IT!

Last word to my readers.... Thank you, I will not fail you.

Sincerely,

Gaea