All Comments on 'The Swim Team Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story. I really hope we get some proper pent-up hands-free action next chapter :)

the5amClubthe5amClubalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous Thanks. Unfortunately the next chapter will be...A FLASHBACK EPISODE! (that's where I lose half my audience)

Overall you'll have to be patient with this series. They'll definitely be some over the top action but from what I wrote so far it seems that I focused more on the characters' life trajectory and quirks than just rushing their way to triple anal.

Rollie88Rollie885 months ago

This is amazingly beautiful. So many details that are just as I might imagine them, perfect.

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