All Comments on 'The Tale of Gottfried Ch. 03'

by Barbarella420

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Amazing!

Are you planning on continuing this story?

Barbarella420Barbarella420almost 3 years agoAuthor

I really really want to but I don't have an ending so im having a really hard time expanding this story. I'm still thinking of ideas I really hope I can get back to this asap. comments help and push me forward so thanks, I'll be thinking about this a lot more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You could make them fall in love on their adventures to get her memory back, because he wants her to remember before killing her, which of course he won't.

Barbarella420Barbarella420over 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you I really appreciate the ideas!! I might just do that

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue this story!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY I WANT THEM TO FALL IN LOVE HAHAHAHAHAP

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please you have to continue this story! Anything everything i need more! They fall in love!

shadrachtshadracht5 months ago

I'm sorry this never finished. Honestly, as effed up as they ate, the best result for them would be living together, where all day long she does on him and is very supportive and loving. And then, when they go to bed, she gives him the domination and humiliation he needs from her, and they both end up in their own fuxked up version of happy.

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