All Comments on 'The Talent Scout 02: Emma’s Rise'

An excellent continuation of the story. Nice to move on from Emma to a new one to keep it fresh.

Well dang!

So, the third one is in the works, or will this lead to a new series altogether?

I liked part 2. I am curious if Emma will end up being used by other men in the industry? What will Thomas do now that he knows the power he has? I am looking forward to a part 3.

Enjoyed this one! Read it along with the first part...

In terms of feedback, maybe you could have elaborated the sex scenes more.

For e.g. they had a final fuck before she goes for Victoria's secret shoot, elaborate that. What did emma wear , how did they do it.

Some scenes felt a bit rushed. Maybe that is why you did not get the response you were expecting.

But a great story, regardless. Please continue with the good work

Love it need more

Very enjoyable series. The main characters started off a bit one dimensional but the description of their relationship is top notch. I can’t wait to read more.

Wish you would have described the lingerie sex scenes better. Also the first blow job which Emma gave.

Maybe I can write a story to fill in the gaps ?

I get you. I focused on a few scenes but it was so long, I had to find ways to shorten it, still keep it sexy and interesting and move the story along. You're welcome to try your hand at filling in those gaps. Knock yourself out.

great writing , love your stuff

Something I would like you to consider. Short stories of sex scenarios. I will send some ideas, you are a great writer, for me the girl orgasm is always the best part, love your description, when she can't stop shaking and convulsing and squirting , Great work, just want more short sex scene scenarios. I will email some ideas. Keep it up ! lol

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More!

Part 3?